Knights vs ninjas by Andrew Park
``a long time ago in America there was a kingdom one was in north America the other one was in south America in central America was the battle field one day there was a battle between knights and ninjas and will the ninjas win yes they will win again and again the knights loose boohoo again and again they loose what weakness said one of the knights ya said another one of the knights that were alive h mm said other knight that just came from the hospital ooh ow he said another knights that were hurt ow ow ow ow ooh ooh ooh ooh said one of the knights that were hurt vary bad ow he said with a stitches
2 comments:
Love to see three books combine together in his mind and come out as a creation.
I love the innocence and freshness of his work thus far. A little difficult as there is no punctiation, but he is only half way through first grade, so what do you expect?
Awesome job Andrew, Love Mom
I love it!
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